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Musings: Historicals

Every spring, daffodils bloom in a corner of my yard near where a house used to be. Once in a while a chunk of the old foundation or a piece of netting from a screen door turns up beside those flowers, but the house was torn down thirty years ago, and it was unlived-in for another twenty-plus years before that. And every spring, I look at those flowers and wonder about the housewife who probably planted them.

For me, writing and reading novels with historical settings has a lot to do with those daffodils, and with all those tiny relics of the past. When I see those flowers, I feel a connection to this unknown woman who planted them. They are a legacy she left behind, one which bridges the gap between times to remind me of a common human thread. That’s what history and archaeology are all about, linking us with our brethren from long ago, reminding us of our deep human connections. And it goes further than that, I believe. When we open ourselves to this true purpose of studying history, we gain a deeper appreciation not just for our connection to peoples of the past, but to other people in our modern world, and gain a deeper sense of our own potential and possibilities.

Historical novels are a part of that. They may be fictional, but they are, when well-written, built on the firm foundations of the past. Studying history is sometimes mired in dates and analysis. Historical novels are the daffodils. They are a way to look back and see the simple wants and needs of men and women like you and me, to appreciate the things that don’t make it into the history books. They may not be vital to understanding history, but they are a means of connecting to humanity.

Ponderisms, New Stuff, and Congratulations

Behold:

  1. I have decided to pull Hex from submission. I received some sage personal feedback from two agents and form rejections from all the rest, and I realize that Hex just isn’t ready yet. I love this story. I believe in this story. I know, really and truly know, that this is a story worthy of publication…but not yet. I see that now. So I’ll be going back to work on that after…
  2. I’m working on a new project. A newer new project. I’d been working on my time travel steampunk novel when this new project came along, and it was going pretty well. But you know how you’re working on a story when all of a sudden another story idea jumps out of nowhere and bitch-slaps you, demanding to be written? That’s what happened to me. I’m not really sure about this one. I mean, I love the idea, am having a blast writing it, but it’s kind of weird. I’m not sure how you’d market this one. It would appeal to fans of urban fantasy and paranormal romance, but it’s not either one of those things. It’s a truck stop romance set in a world infested with oversized crustaceans and giant squid, and it’s called The Octopus That Drank Lake Michigan.
  3. With this new novel, I have a pretty diverse collection of stories in some stage of being in progress. I’m trying to figure out how to make this site reflect all of these weird and different from each other stories and still have a unified feel and look. And I’m thinking of altering my online presence in other ways. I used to be an avid blogger. I still enjoy blogging occasionally, but time constraints which I never used to have are making it difficult to blog with both quality and frequency. I’m still going to keep the blog, but how do I want to use it? And do I want to turn to a social networking site as my main way of connecting with other writers and, later, readers? I’ll be figuring out all of this sometime and reporting on the changes when they come.
  4. Lastly, I guess I can share this now, since she’s gone public with it on her own blog. Way back in 2006, I first became friends and critique partners with AG Howard, and after years of hard work, she has now signed her very first book publishing contract with Amulet in a 2-book deal. Hers is a YA novel about what happens when the descendant of Alice of Wonderland fame finds herself on her very own Wonderland adventure. So congratulations, Anita! Here is the link to her announcement. She’s planning to do a series of posts about the submission process soon. I love reading about authors’ journeys to success, so I for one am planning to tune in for those.

Have a lovely day!

New!

I have posted a brief summary of Fiddlesticks to the “My Writing” page. It’s a historical fantasy set in colonial Maryland and is intended to be the first in a series of three books. I recently finished the first draft.

This post is too short. Enjoy this picture of a cupcake that looks like Mr. Bill.

Technique and the Master Writer

In writing, we tend to think about craft in categories: plot, characterization, dialogue, description, and so on. Like any craftsmen, such is our training. To learn the mechanics of technique, we must learn each technique individually, just as artists learn color and symmetry separately.

But craft only becomes art when those techniques cease to be individual disciplines. You can teach plot and characterization as separate entities, but can you build a successful plot without building compelling characters? Can you create compelling characters without testing their mettle through the plot? A master writer blends his techniques together so that they become completely indivisible, almost impossible to distinguish from each other entirely.

So where do we fall on the craft hierarchy? And how can we reach the next step? Are we the eager apprentices, still learning individual techniques? The journeymen who have transitioned from technique mastery to creating our first masterpieces? Or are we the master craftsmen, with scores of publishing credits to our names?

And why does it matter where we stand? I suppose the name we put on our progress doesn’t matter…but our mindset does. When we’re still thinking of craft as puzzle pieces rather than blendable matter like paint, we still haven’t mastered the craft. And that’s okay. Mastery comes with application. That’s why so many authors have a stack of unpublished manuscripts. Practice novels.

Still, there’s something to be said for categorizing techniques. Breaking them apart allows us to delve deeply into such topics as pacing and narrative, understanding them more fully. We can’t become masters of the craft without such knowledge.

Not only that, but even a master writer must go back to these basics now and then. A true master knows that improving your craft is a process that never ends—one which is built on the foundation of individual techniques. Have you ever loved an author’s first two books only to be utterly disappointed in her fourth and fifth? Review is essential. Technique is an ongoing study.

It’s all about balance. Plot, characterization, dialogue, description: we seek to balance them in our novels the way painters seek balance on the canvas. The individual applications of color theory, symmetry, proportion, shape, and light come together not as puzzle pieces, but as a unified whole.

The master artist uses technique the way he uses paint—he mixes those basic colors together on his palette. We must do the same on the page.

The Facebook Writer’s Challenge

There’s only so much you can say in 420 characters. Or is there? Facebook is certainly an exercise in writing efficiency. If you have only a brief sentence to share, you won’t have a problem, but if you want to go on a bit longer, Facebook forces you to cut absolutely every nonessential word. It teaches you to write tight—a vital skill for writers. Which got me thinking. Which got me experimenting. And thus the Facebook Writer’s Challenge was born.

Take a chunk of text from your work-in-progress. A short paragraph or a few sentences—something that’s about 520 characters. (Your word processor’s word count feature should give a character count as well.) See if you can edit that passage down to 420 characters. Cut unnecessary words—even unnecessary sentences. Replace big words with smaller ones. Find anything that isn’t essential and cut ruthlessly.

Now take a look.

Many—even most—times, you’ll be shocked at how much cleaner and crisper your writing is…all without losing an ounce of your message. Other times, you’ll find that your words lose a little power in the cutting. But even at times like these, you’ll likely discover a few bits of flab that can go. A whole manuscript revision based on this technique with tiny chunks of text may be overkill, but it’s a great trick to use on sections where the pace lags or which feel overly-wordy. And it’s a great exercise to use regularly to keep in the habit of writing tight.

Loyal Characters, Loyal Fans

Loyalty among a story’s characters is, I am convinced, the key to a story which readers cannot forget–and one key to earning loyal fans. Why was Star Wars such a success? The series Stargate SG-1? (I know these aren’t books, but stick with me.) Why do they have a cult following? Sure, there are lots of things that make them great. But just look at the dynamic between the characters. These characters may not always see eye-to-eye, but when it comes down to what really matters, these friends can always count on each other. These are loyal friendships. They are priceless. Don’t you wish you had friends like that?

And that’s just it–such unfailing loyalty is rare in real life. We’ve all been there, where we thought a person was a loyal friend, but that person ended up stabbing us in the back to save their own interests. Not only have we all been there, but we’ve all been there multiple times. True loyalty is rare. That’s why it’s so special. In real life and in stories alike. A story’s success depends on many things, true. A writer’s ability to craft a suspenseful plot, a high-concept idea, a vivid and evocative setting; these can all contribute to a book’s (or movie’s) success. But characters are what keep those fans coming back for more. Along with the relationships which those characters forge.

When a reader picks up a novel, he’s usually looking for an escape. We read for entertainment, yes–and we are entertained by an experience which we ourselves might dream about for ourselves. An experience which either brings back fond memories or provides us something which is scarce in our own lives. And a loyal group of friends is pretty rare. Loyal individuals are a little easier to find, but a team of friends who can count on each other through thick and thin is something we all crave. And so, loyal characters = loyal fans. Because we like to read about people we’d love to be friends with.

Blending Genres

So I’ve been reading a lot of genre-blending novels lately. And loving them. And my post from last week talks about genre-blending a little bit, but today I want to say a little more. (Apparently, I don’t know when to shut up.) Genre-blending gives us a lot to think about. There’s a reason publishing people will warn you to give it some serious thought before you do it, and not all of it is because it’s hard to shelve mixed genre novels in the bookstore.

Over the years, something I’ve learned about novel writing is that it’s all about focus and balance. Every word, sentence, paragraph, plot thread, and character must have a place in the story, and each element needs to be put in the proper focus. Some elements are vital, and these become the focal points of your novel. Other elements are secondary. They’re not the focus of the story, but they set a tone, give the story weight, and add richness to the novel. They hold the story up. And you have to balance your secondary elements with your focus points, or your story will fall apart.

Genres become elements that need proper focus and balance when you have more than one of them in your story. Think of them as plotlines. Generally speaking, you’re not going to have three main plots in a novel. One will be the main plot, and the other two will be subplots. The reason for this is that things can get overwhelming when all three plots are vying for dominance. I hesitate to give any hard and fast rules, since the rules can very occasionally be broken, but it’s usually better to make one plotline the focus, and the others are there for balance. And my observations lead me to believe it’s the same for genres within a book. If you’re going to write a historical fantasy romance, one of those genres needs to take the lead. Let that be your focal point. Let the historical and romance elements bring the reader more deeply into your fantasy tale. Let them be the weights that balance the main genre in your book.

For some real-world examples, here are three books that serve to illustrate my point. The Manual of Detection by Jedediah Berry, which I read last month, blends mystery and fantasy. Though the book is shelved in the fantasy section (a whole other discussion entirely), the fantasy elements are really just a subgenre holding up the main genre–the book is a mystery novel at heart. In Outlander by Diana Gabaldon, we have history, fantasy, and romance, but romance is the main plot. The Strangely Beautiful Tale of Miss Percy Parker by Leanna Renee Hieber is also history, fantasy, and romance, but if you take a good look, it is the fantasy aspect of the story which dominates the book.

Conventional wisdom from agents and editors often cautions against too much genre-blending. Is it completely related to trouble figure out where to shelve such a book? Publishing people see more unpublished manuscripts than you or I likely ever will. They must know something. They must know how often fledgling authors botch their genre-blending tales. For genre-blending to work, you need balance, focus. You need to be blending genres because the genres you’re blending have a place in your plot, not just because you think it would be cool to blend genres. After careful analysis of mixed genre books, I’ve come to believe that choosing a dominant genre to center the book around–and relegating others to supporting roles–is a tried and true approach to writing a successful genre-blending novel.

I’m not saying it’s the only way. I’m not saying I’m an expert on such things. Just making an observation.

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